De is mandatory between permettre and an infinitive. The right form is ne vous permettent pas de le faire.
A few comments:
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Despite its final S, the word tennis is singular here so that must be written au tennis, not aux tennis (you don’t play "tennisses").
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This is addressed to a kid so the vouvoiement is unlikely.
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Permettre de le faire can be simplified to le permettre, l’autoriser, être d’accord or simply vouloir.
That leads to:
Si tu veux jouer au tennis mais que tes parents veulent pas, je peux t’aider.
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